Her parents made her go to China, to show her how they Chinese live. That is why her parents inrolled her in this program and also to experience the Beijing Olympics. Even thought there is drama in "America" there is just as much high school drama in China."I think we all learned something a bit more real-life that summer". She said she has learned that memories are everything in life.
Hi Chelsey,
ReplyDeletePlease don't centre your work--it makes it look odd. You can centre your titles, if you like.
I think you mean 'enrolled' rather than 'unrolled.' Likewise 'tho' should be 'though.' Also, don't forget to put a capital 'C' for China and make sure to start each and every sentence with a capital letter. Finally, you should take out the numbers, you don't need them.
Once you have done all that, you will have a reasonable summary that is free from obvious errors. Bravo! :) You did a good job of picking supporting details and also hunting down a main idea statement.